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[Enjin Archive] Poetry
Started by [E] PandaPsych0013

so I write poetry (if you make fun of me, I kick your arse) and I was wonder what yall thought:

Inside My Mind

A thought, a wonder,

Trapped inside my mind.

The sudden crack of thunder,

Creatures scurry to any shelter they can find.

The sound of lighting striking a tree,

The smell of burning brichwood.

The feathered creatures, they flee.

The charcoal brunt wood,

It morphs into something new,

An unopened door,

It is blue.

But to remain shut forever more.

This door leads outside my mind,

Though it is locked,

And the key none shall ever find.
Nice to see someone who isn't insecure about being called homo for writing poetry.

+1 <object class="emojione" data="https://resources.enjin.com/1489581540/themes/core/images/emojione/svg/1f600.svg?0" type="image/svg+xml" standby=":d">:d</object> I've written poetry before, and one got into some sort of poetry book my old Eng Lit teacher mentioned, but I'm not particularly good.
It's really good, how long have you been writing for and I'm guessing there is a story behind this poem.
Gazing into her eyes

I see that in which

not even the stars can compare

But knowing those eyes

those love struck eyes

are gazing into mine

Just a simple glimpse

leaves me breathless

Gasping....for more
Thanks, and I've been writing poetry for a couple years now, but writing in general for about 6 years now. I'm currently writing a book and hoping to get some of my poetry published. There is a kind of strange story behind this poem, I was actually ticked off because I screwed up my ankle so I could not participate in my gym class, so I began to write this and turns out, it was a prompt for English too, so it kind of worked out. It's also my best poem apparently.
Danny wrote:
Gazing into her eyes

I see that in which

not even the stars can compare

But knowing those eyes

those love struck eyes

are gazing into mine

Just a simple glimpse

leaves me breathless

Gasping....for more

this is a really good poem dude
Thanks <object class="emojione" data="https://resources.enjin.com/1489581540/themes/core/images/emojione/svg/1f61b.svg?0" type="image/svg+xml" standby=":p">:p</object>

I use to write poems all the time~

(gets the ladies ;D)
Danny wrote:
Thanks <object class="emojione" data="https://resources.enjin.com/1489581540/themes/core/images/emojione/svg/1f61b.svg?0" type="image/svg+xml" standby=":p">:p</object>

I use to write poems all the time~

(gets the ladies ;D)

Turn me on ;D (btw I'm a chick just so yall know)
Thanks <object class="emojione" data="https://resources.enjin.com/1489581540/themes/core/images/emojione/svg/1f61b.svg?0" type="image/svg+xml" standby=":p">:p</object>

Kills my fiance' every time ;D
Nice