Zionia, i have to say, It looks quite nice. For future sketches however, I do recommend graph paper, because the slopes and curves wont be as sloped or curved in Minecraft as in real life. But other than that design suggestion, I think it looks great1

thankies. i am planning to do the next one on graph paper...i needed to sketch and scan this one in about 5 minutes though so the other members could see it...so i didnt have much time for neatness or finding my graph paper...but that should come with the 2nd draft