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[Enjin Archive] ZackMart the better way to save
Started by [E] MegaKill

@1787762 wrote:
So could Make my own shop and sell stuff for like an mtc a piece, then show you...

If you did that, he'd turn up, buy all your stupidly cheap stock, and then claim you can't tell him to adjust his prices because you have no stock.
you cant just do that only competitors which are working signs

i only compete with

market places,dteandy,neil,ron,and other big shops
I'm gonna give you a tip or two.

1: Please, for the love of God, use better English. Good English makes you look professional, respectable (to an extent), and mature.

2: Think about what you're about to say before you say it. This line sounds very unprofessional:
ZachChris wrote:
other shop owners are scared of us because of are fantastic low prices

*Note that the spelling error is only the tip of the iceberg of problems with the sentence.

3: Repeat step two. Again.

4: Check it all against step one and make sure that you have used punctuation in the correct places, along with proper capitalization. Trust me, proper English goes a long way when you're trying to look more mature.

Good luck! <object class="emojione" data="https://resources.enjin.com/1489581540/themes/core/images/emojione/svg/1f44d.svg?0" type="image/svg+xml" standby=":thumb:">:thumb:</object>

EDIT: Just to give you an example, I took the liberty of tidying up the op on this thread:

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NOW OPEN!

ZackMart has the lowest prices on all products! From cocoa to blaze rods, we are working on getting every block in the game on our shelves!

Find a lower price on a product we offer? We price match with established shops to get you the most from your visits!

We also offer good deals on enchanted tools!

Drop on by! You can find us at /home ZachChris Shop!

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I know it's a bit dry in colors and overall "bling appeal", but you'll find that a properly worded post is the key to gaining shoppers' respect and business.
whatever its just a game forum i dont need to have proper grammar
@2998720 wrote:
whatever its just a game forum i dont need to have proper grammar

And this is how to not gain shoppers' respect and business.

Your loss.
sure because a game is such a big business
ill use yours though
Never mind, I'm a plank.